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my favourite place in Chile
Hello, I wont to talk about my favourite place in Chile and this place is Viña del Mar city.I love that city bicause I love the see, and Viña is a coastal city but besides this city is very romantic and I like to go whith my boyfrend and friends.I like it too because it is a very small city and you can tour it wolking, and is very nice wolking whith see breeze.In the summer I like to go to the beach en the morning whith any friend and stay there until six p.m. taking sun and eat ice-cream and swim in the sea.After six I like wolk and visit craft fairs and i like one fair in particular because it sells many tipe of books end very cheap and I always buy strangers books, for example this summes I buy a book about Indian Mithology.After that, in the night I like to go to eat somethig tasty, end my boyfrien like to go to a "Cuernavaca" bicause he like to eat good meet, but this is not good for me because I dont eat meet and I always go to some other place.I realy like Viña del Mar because is small, fresh, and beauty all year and is near Santiago end you can go any day if you wont to escape of Santiago.

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Hello, I talk about my favorite place in chile, this place is viña del mar.
Y love this city, because y love the sea, and viña is a coastal city but besides this city is very romantic and I like to go whit my boyfriend and friends.I like it too because it is a very small city and you can has a tour it walking, and is very nice walking whit a sea breeze.
In the summer I like to go a beach in the morning whit any friend and stay there until six p.m. taking sun and eat ice-cream and swim in the sea.After the six o clock I like walk and visit craft fairs, I liked one in particular, because have many type of books and very cheap. I always buy strangers books, for example this summer I buy a book about Indian Mithology.
In the night I like to go to eat something tasty, end my boyfriend like to go to a "Cuernavaca" because he like to eat good meet, but this is not good for me because I don’t eat meet and I always go to some other place.I really like Viña del Mar because is small, fresh, and beauty all year and is near Santiago end you can go any day if you wont to escape of Santiago.